Tuesday, June 15, 2010
Vocabulary Words From Wed. May 12
2. I went into a empty hall and yelled. It echoed.
3. I have alot of photographs of me when I was little.
4. At airports they have sensor to tell if you have any metal on you.
5. When I get older I want to become a scientist.
6. The sky became lightening then the other day.
7. I hate me friend. Especially when she is mean to other peoples.
8. At a club they have lights that flicker.
9. I saw an explosion.
10. My hair has static in the morning.
Monday, June 14, 2010
Independend Novel Part 1 (fixed)
1. Give the authors name and a paragraph outlining some biographical information. Please consult 2-3 sources and write your answer from point form notes in order to avoid plagiarism
The author of the book "marked" is P.C. Cast + Kristin Cast some interesting information from her biography is:
-P.C. Cast was born in the Midwest, and grew up being shuttled back-and-forth between Illinois and Oklahoma, which is where she fell in love with Quarter Horses and mythology (at about the same time). from http://www.pccast.net/biography.html
-Kristin Cast is a NY Times and USA Today bestselling author who teams with her mother to write the House of Night YA series. from http://www.pccast.net/biography.html
- On her own, P.C. Cast is known for her Goddess Summoning and Partholon book series.Her first book, Goddess by Mistake, was originally published in 2001, won the Prism, Holt Medallion, and Laurel Wreath awards, and was a finlalist for the National Readers' Choice Award; her subsequent books have won a variety of prizes. from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/P._C._Cast
2. Name and describe the main character(s). Are they static or dynamic? What motivates them? (A static character does not change, a dynamic character changes as a result of his or her experiences)
The main character in this book is Zoey Redbird. She is a 16-year-old girl in the novel. She is a dynamic character in the novel because she gets marked by a vampire. That means that she is going to become a vampire as well. After that her whole life changed.
3. What is the novel setting? Why, in your opinion, did the author choose this setting for this novel?
The setting of this novel is at a high school meant for vampires. In my opinion I think that the author chose to use this as the setting because it is about a 16-year-old who gets marked by a vampire. She can't go back to her old school or to her our family. That meant she had to go to a special high school called The House of Night that is meant for her kind.
4. If you could be any character in the novel, who would you be? Why that character?
I think if I could be any character in the novel I would be Stevie Rae. The reason why I would be her is because she is a very nice person. She would go out of her way to help you even though she doesn't know you. She is Zoey's best friend even though no one likes her. Also she is a brave character in the novel.
5. Would you like to read more books from the same author? Why?
Yes I would love to read more books or novels from this author. The reason why I would love to read more is because in her novels she gets very descriptive so I can imagine what is happening in the book and also the way the novel flows when you read it to yourself or out load.
Independend Novel Part 2 (fixed)
I think that is book did interest me. The reasons why this book interests me is because how the author worded it and how she describes the features of the characters and what is happening in the novel it makes the book seen more real.
7. In what way do you think you are very like or very unlike the main character? Explain:
I think that the main character Zoey and I have some similarities in common. Some would be that she is nice and she can be outgoing just like me. Also she has a very creative mind when she is trying to finger things out and how to do it.
8. Describe a main events. Where does the climax take place?
One of the main events that I liked in this book was when Zoey when to a ritual with the Dark Daughters and Sons. Zoey don’t know that she drank blood when the leader Aphrodite walked around with a bowl and offer it to her. When Zoey found out she was very upset with Aphrodite that she did that to her.
9. What are the scenes, incidents or moments which you remember most vividly?
The last scene in the book is very hard to describe. Basically she saved very one how was in the ritual with the Dark Daughter and Sons. I think this scene was disturbing because the leader Aphrodite was raying sprites to try to get more powers.
10. Different the main conflicts that take place in the novel.
I think main conflict that happen in this book would between Zoey and Aphrodite. They both dislike each other and it is all because that Zoey has great power and she is scare that Zoey will take her place as the leader of the Dark Daughters. Also that Zoey is dating her ex boyfriends and she don’t like it because she still like him.
Friday, June 11, 2010
Lisa Leslie new
Wednesday, June 9, 2010
Independent Novel Part 2
Yes it did interest me. The reason why I it interest me is because how the author worded it and how she describes what is happening in the novel.
7.In what way do you think you are very like or very unlike the main character? Explain:
I think that the main character Zoey and I have some similarities in common. Some would be that she is nice and she can be outgoing like me. Also she has a very creative mind like mine.
8.Describe a main events. Where does the climax take place?
One of the main events that I liked in this book was when Zoey when to a ritual with the Dark Daughter and Son Zoey drank blood and she didn't know about it. When she found out she was very upset.
9. What are the scenes, incidents or moments which you remember most vividly?
The last scene in the book is very hard to described. Basically she saved very one how was in the ritual with the Dark Daughter and Sons.I think this scene was disturbing because the leader Aphrodite was raying sprites.
10. Different the main conflicts that take place in the novel.
The main conflict that happen in this book would between Zoey and Aphrodite. They both dislike each other and it is all because that Zoey has great power and she is scare that Zoey will take her place as the leader of the Dark Daughters. Also that Zoey is dating her ex boyfriends and she do like it because she still like him.
Tuesday, June 1, 2010
Lisa Lesie
Friday, May 28, 2010
Independent Novel
1. Give the authors name and a paragraph outlining some biographical information. Please consult 2-3 sources and write your answer from point form notes in order to avoid plagiarism
The author of the book "marked" is P.C. Cast + Kristin Cast some interesting information from her biography is:
-P.C. Cast was born in the Midwest, and grew up being shuttled back-and-forth between Illinois and Oklahoma, which is where she fell in love with Quarter Horses and mythology (at about the same time). from http://www.pccast.net/biography.html
-Kristin Cast is a NY Times and USA Today bestselling author who teams with her mother to write the House of Night YA series. from http://www.pccast.net/biography.html
- On her own, P.C. Cast is known for her Goddess Summoning and Partholon book series.Her first book, Goddess by Mistake, was originally published in 2001, won the Prism, Holt Medallion, and Laurel Wreath awards, and was a finlalist for the National Readers' Choice Award; her subsequent books have won a variety of prizes. from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/P._C._Cast
2. Name and describe the main character(s). Are they static or dynamic? What motivates them? (A static character does not change, a dynamic character changes as a result of his or her experiences)
The main character in this book is Zoey Redbird. She is a 16-year-old girl in the novel. She is a dynamic character in the novel because she gets marked by a vampire. That means that she is going to become a vampire as well. After that her whole life changed.
3. What is the novels setting? Why, in your opinion, did the author choose this setting for this novel?
The setting of this novel is at a high school meant for vampires. In my opinion I think that the author chose to use this as the setting because it is about a 16-year-old who gets marked by a vampire. She can't go back to her old school or to her our family. That meant she had to go to a special high school called The House of Night that is meant for her kind.
4. If you could be any character in the novel, who would you be? Why that character?
I think if I could be any character in the novel I would be Stevie Rae. The reason why I would be her is because she is a very nice person. She would go out of her way to help you even though she doesn't know you . She is Zoey's best friend even though no one likes her . Also she is a brave character in the noval.
5. Would you like to read more books from the same author? Why?
Yes I would love to read more books or novels from this author. The reason why I would love to read more is because in her novels she gets very descriptive and also the way the novel flows when you read it.
Wednesday, May 26, 2010
vocab .... 2
2. I hear a kid boasted to his friend.
3. Everyone has to announce you're work to the class.
4. You learn about the immune system in science.
5. I seen a whirlwind in the summer.
6. On new years, people like to revelry.
7. It was a fluck that i got the winner goal.
8. Some people have big contorversial between each other.
9. You can accommodate elders.
10.After the school ends, the school will be forresumed next year.
Monday, May 17, 2010
Vocabulary :)
2. The teacher was exasperated with problem student.
3. You get exhausted by doing sports.
4. Some people have desperation to sale all of there stuff to get money for drugs.
5. At school they give you opportunity.
6. My brothers use to embarrassed me all the time.
7. I occasionally clean the house for my mommy.
8. Some gym teachers like to build stamina on the students.
9. When you get piercings they have to penetrated your skin.
10. When you work, you have to have good coordination skills.
Friday, May 14, 2010
Playing in The Rain

Last night My best Friend Kendra and I was playing in the rain. I think that people should have more fun in the rain and play in it like Kendra and I. The reasons why I think this is because any one can have fun in the rain Also it is just fun playing in it.
Anyone can have fun in the rain at any time. No matter if your older or younger it fun just let go in the rain. You don't have to care on what you look like. It is for the fun of it.
You can do alot of thing in the rain at night. you can jump into big puddles and also you can wet your best friends. The one thing that I like to do in the rain is run around.
In conclusion, I think that every one should have some fun and play in the rain and let go for once. The reason why are anyone can have fun in the rain and you can do alot of thinks in the rain in the night.
Thursday, May 13, 2010
Writing Paragraphs
Wednesday, May 12, 2010
Vocabulary Words
2. I went into a empty hall and yelled. It echoed.
3. I have alot of photographs of me when I was little.
4. At airports they have sensor to tell if you have any metal on you.
5. When I get older I want to become a scientist.
6. The sky became lightening then the other day.
7. I hate me friend. Especially when she is mean to other peoples.
8. At a club they have lights that flicker.
9. I seen an explosion.
10. My hair has static in the morning.
Tuesday, May 11, 2010
Wednesday, May 5, 2010
Chapter 5
He was 14 years old.
2. Who is the president of the United States in 1790? (1mark)
George Washington.
3. How did the surveyor plot the land that they would eventually build the new city? (2 marks)
The surveyor had to lay out the straight kine for the 10 mile city. He had to plot a perfect line running north and south using his interments, his astronomical clock and his calculation.
4. What job did Benjamin Banneker get during this time? What was his title and who was he working for? (2 marks)
Benjamin Banneker's job was surveyor's chief assistant. He was working for President Washington and Thomas Jefferson.
5. How old is Benjamin in 1791? (1 mark6. How does Benjamin feel when he reads his name in the news paper on March 12th? (1 mark)
His name spelt ring again, but Benjamin carefully and proudly folded his copy of the new paper and laid it aside with his notes.
Friday, April 30, 2010
Chapter Four
Ten Vocabulary Words
2. In Six Nation they have tobacco factorys.
3. I seen ten caterpillars this hole summer.
4. There are two different way to go down the path.
5. My anute has five acres on land.
.6. I'm going to try to figure it out.
7. I walked through a valley.
8. Today I bough to new clothes for myself.
9. I thought that this word was wrong.
10. That is enough.
Thursday, April 29, 2010
Thank You
Your work is showing great improvements!
Thank you for taking the time to spell check your work and to put more time and effort into things.
I am happy to provide you with more topics to write on, practicing your writing will help you to improve your reading, spelling and grammar!
-Miss S.
Black Slavery
In my own opinion I think that black slavery is a horrible think to do to someone else that you do not ever now. My reason why I think that black slavery is horrible because it rode to do to someone. It can effect the person how was a slaver later on he/her life. Also its just not right to take advantage of someone that you do not know about.
Its is very road to take away a kid from there live to become a slave. Becoming a slave would be hard on the kid or a young adult who is going to be on. Yo would have to do all the thinks that they tell you to do. Also it just not nice to do that to someone.
After someone who was a slave, it can effeck the rest of your life. It will be hard for someone after being a slave for so long it would be hard to go back on living the that you did. If would be different not doing someone elsestuff, but now doing your on stuff.
It is not right how some person can take advantage of someone. You can hurt them, mentally scar them, also it just not right that you can do that to some person that do not know what is happening to him/her.
In conclusion, I think it is horrible that some person can do this to another person for this society. There are my reasons why it just plane road, It can effect someone after being a slave, also it is not right to take advantage of someone. After reading my pragraph know you can see how horrible it is to have a black slave or just a slave in general.
Chapter Three
Benjamin kelp his mind busy by making a complicated math puzzles using number and plants and animals.
2. How old was Benjamin in 1751? (1 Mark)
In 1751 Benjamin was 20 years old now.
3. What made Benjamin’s heart jump like a rabbit? (1 Mark)
When he saw what the man had in his hands. The man had GOLD watch!
4. What did Benjamin do with the watch when he got home? (2 Marks)
When he got home he put the GOLD watch on a wooden table. Then after that he started to take the watch a pair to see how it was made.
5. How many years after Benjamin borrowed the gold watch did it take for him to make all the pieces and put them back together again? (1 Mark)
It was two years after he had borrowed the GOLD watch, Benjamin put all the pieces together.
Wednesday, April 28, 2010
Chapter Two
A Quaker farmer had moved into the next valley, and he planned to start a school that would be open during the winter when he wasn't farming.
2. Describe the events of Benjamin’s first day of school, fully. (3 Marks)
The first day of school, Benjamin did his chores early. Then he put on his new white shirt and other school clothes. When he was ready, his mother gave him kiss. Grandma Molly gave him her best quill pen, a penknife to sharpen it with, and a kiss.
3. How many other kids were in the school when Benjamin arrived on his first day? (1 Marks)
When Benjamin arrived at the school there were ten other students there sitting down.
4. After going to school for four winters what had Benjamin learned? (2 Marks)
Benjamin had learned all the arithmetic, geography, and spelling.
Monday, April 26, 2010
Read Pages 24 - 30 as a class
On page 26 Gloria was aloud to Leave the hospital to go back to her home.
2. How many weeks after Gloria got out of the hospital passed before she started to work on her music again? Was her music a source of comfort?
It was a few weeks after Gloria left the hospital she started to work on her mucis. When she was working on her music she thought it helped her get thought her difficult time.
3. When did Gloria and the Miami Sound Machine begin to play their music again?
Gloria and the Miami Sound Machine begin to play their music in March of 1992. Also there played there music in many cities in the United States and around the world.
4. How does Gloria Estefan describe herself on the last page (page 29)
Estefan see herself this way "I'm an example of a Cuban American who's different from my mother and others of the generation... "
5. Reflect: Have you ever had to overcome something in your life that you did not think you could? What tools and skills did you use in order to overcome this ordeal?
The one think the I had to overcome when I was little was my speach. I had a very hard time when I was little to say some words. the tools and skills that helped me to overcome my speach problem.
The tools that I had would be that I has someone to help me when I was little to help me with my speach and work on it so it would be better then it was. The skills that I got out of this was to sound out words so I know what it spells and then to learn how to say it.
Friday, April 23, 2010
Vocabulary Worlds
2.I attach two sticks together by a rope.
3. You have to follow a procedure for an exam.
4. Some people can be prejudice.
5. I meet a Latina girl at my old school.
6. In my science class we made a mixture of chemicals.
7. My friend and I got the highest achievement award in our cosmetology class.
8. I seen a performance at Stamford High School.
9. I convince my friend that I was a spy.
10. I had alot of determination to get better
Tuesday, April 20, 2010
Journal # 2 for Miss. S
Reading Comprehension Questions Pages 10 – 19
Went there got there they found out that cubes was not aloud to enter the new city. Cubans have faced prejudice and mistreatment in the United States because of their background Gloria mom found a sigh on one of the apartments. It said"Co children, no pets, no Cubans."
2. Which place did Gloria always consider to be home?
Gloria always consider Miami to be home to her.
3. When was the first time Gloria performed?
Glorica first time performing when she went to a wedding and a group call the Miami Latin Boys asked her to sing a few song there.
4. List the three types of music described in “Cuba’s Music and Culture”, which type would you prefer to listen to and why?
The three different type of music they have are Son, Rumba, and Danzon.
I type of music i would listen to for these three would be Rumba. The reason why I picked this is because it is more danging music and it sounds more outgoing and fun.
Monday, April 19, 2010
Reading Comprehension Questions Pages 1 -9
Gloria Estefan is a famous singer.
2. What part of Gloria was injured in the bus accident on March 20th, 1990?
She injured her lower back.
3. Have you ever broken a bone? If yes which bone? If no what do you think your life would be like if you had to wear a cast on your arm for eight weeks?
It would be have to cop with a cast on my arm. I would have to work around it to complete my task.
4. Estefan had to make a choice between having a surgery to correct her broken bones or have her entire body in a cast for six months. Which choice would you have made and why?
I would have choice the same one as her. My reason why is that you have do more things then having a FULL cast on your body. Also you can take showers.
5. Estefan and her parents were considered to be exiles, they moved to the United States in the Late 1950’s and early 1960’s? Why did they move?
They moved because they don't like how the Cuban government was like.
6. Who is the Author of this book?
Fernando Gonzalez
Friday, April 16, 2010
What I'm Doing This Weekend :)
My weekend is going to be very busy but it is worth it.
Thursday, April 15, 2010
Reading Comprehension Pages 37-47
Subway art is art the they put up in the tunnels to make it look nice and show charactor to the tunnel
2. Reflect: have you ever ridden on the subway? Did you see any art? Should we have art along our subway tunnels and our stations?
I have never bin in a subway, but I think it would be nice to see art work in a subway stations and in the tunnel. It will make that subway station different from the other station that they have around the area.
3. How do they control the subway train traffic in the new subway systems?
They use an automatic signaling from the central contron.
Wednesday, April 14, 2010
I'm a Teacher my Math Class
I do'nt think I could be a teacher. I find it would be hard trying to teach a HOLE class.
Reading Comprehension Pages 26-36
They lay a thinck layer of poured concrete seals the cut and forms the tunnel's floor.
2.What to construction workers do at surface level in order to prepare the city at surface level for the Metro Red Lin's midtown route?
Meanwhile, other construction crews have been getting the Red Line's midtown route ready for boring.
3. What is the name of the temporary road called that is created for street traffic to use during the cut and cover station construction? What are these roads made out of and why?
To keep traffic moving while cut and cover stations are being constructed, a temporary road called Decking is built over the torn-up srteets.
4. On Pages 30-31 there are is a model of the train station, do you like it? What would you change about this station model?
It looks like a very nice station model. I wouldn't change nothing about the model.
5. What is the "Pink Lady"?
The Pink Lady is a flatbed truck
Tuesday, April 13, 2010
Colorful Days
Bright color resemble me. It hows that am a bright person. Also it shows that am very out going person on what I wear.
I like to stand out from everyone else. It makes me feel like I an individual person and I like to show it off. Also i don't want to look like everyone.
For some random reason bright colors make me feel in a good mood. What every I wear you can tell what I'm feeling.
In conclusion, I love to wear very bright colors anywhere i go. For all of the reason why. It show me, I love to stand out , and colors make me feel happy.
Vocabulary Word
1. Excavate- Dig, remove, create a hole
2. Artifact- Anything made or used by man kind
3. Uprooted- Pull up, destroy, remove
4. Contaminate- Impure, unclean
5. Camaraderie- Friendship, bond
6. Gleaming- Flash, dim light
7. Gruelling- Exhausting, tiring
8. Commission- Given authority, put in charge, given direction
9. Roam- Travel without fixed purpose,
10. Subterranean- Exists below the surface of the earth
1. When I was little I used to excavate holes in the sand box in my back yard.
2. You can find artifacts in Rome.
3. I uprooted a flower in my garden.
4. Chemicals can contaminate the water.
5. I share camaraderie with the teacher.
6. On a sunny day i saw a window gleaming in the sun.
7. Cheer leading predict is very gruelling.
8. I was commissioned to plan a park.
9. Alot of students roam the halls at Stamford High School.
10. There is lava in subterranean leave of Earth.
Reading Comprehension Pages 16-25
His many concerns are do building methods and materials match those in the agreement? Are schedule met? Are costs kept within bounds?
2. Why do they engineers and construction workers use a boring machine to make tunnels instead of cut and cover construction?
Boring creates far less surface disturbance than cut and cover construction.
3. What do the worker’s do to protect themselves in the newly formed tunnels from harmful levels of gases found in the soil at the various new subway sites?
There have a powerful fan to suck stagnate tunnel air through these duct and out of the tunnel. As the foul air departs, fresh air rushes in .
Monday, April 12, 2010
What is hard for me !!!!
It is hard trying to do more then one sport. Right now I'm in cheer leading at Stamford High School. It is hard trying to do two different sports at once. One day you have to do one of the sports. Also you might have the two sports on the same day so you have to choose what one you want to do.
It can be hard to do iscgoing to school. There are alot of things that can happen there. You can have alot of stress because of all of the product you Will have to do. Also you have to time for your friends or sometime for yourself.
It is hard to get a job. It can be alot of work going to school, doing sports, and having homework you have to get done. When you have a job its hard to do allot of things.
In conclusion, i think live is hard. This are my reason why I think it is hard.
Reading Comprehension pages 1 to 15
There are building a new subway in Los Angeles
2. Why is there a need for a subway system here? What issue will it resole?
In the city roads are getting to be very busy so there are going to make a subways to help it out. By making a new subway it can help people to get jobs. Also it can close down some buildings or walkways or close down roads.
3. The chief construction Engineer, John Adams plays what role in the process of creating a new subways system?
John Adam is their vice-president in charge of the overall planning and construction.
4. What is the role of Roberta Greenwood?
Will oversee preservation of the valuable artifacts
5. What can be learned from the process of analyzing the excavation site?
To find what was there before.
6. What is your opinion on page 11, where they have decided to destruct MacArthur Park to make it into the hub of the Metro Line?
I think it is a ban plan to destruct the park. The reasons why i believe this is that is will take away a park from kids and family, it wall take away homes for animals, and there will be taking away natural.
Wednesday, March 31, 2010
Me as a writer. New :)
I am sometimes confident with my ability in English. The one ability that I am confident with is speaking out loud but when I am reading I have trouble reading out loud. I have problem with.
2. What is your favorite type of writing to do? (e.g. stories, song lyrics, poems or emails) What is it that you like about that type of writing?
I like to write in story format because I think it is easy to do that.
3. What is your least favourite type of writing to do? What is it that bothers you most about that type of writing?
My least favorite type of writing is doing poems because I think it is hard to think of words that rhyme with each other.
4. Tell about a piece of writing that you have really enjoyed. This could be a story read to you by a teacher or a movie you think is really funny (remember, a good movie comes from a good screenplay--which is writing).
The piece that I enjoy is 'Marked'. It is about a girl and how she got marked by a vampire. Now she has to go to a different school to learn what happen to her. The reason I like it is because the writer was very descriptive and I like how they presented the words in the book.
5. Give your thoughts and opinions about the Ontario Secondary School Literacy Test. What do you know about it? What would you like to know about it?
The thing that I know about the literacy test is that it is mandatory for every grade 10 to do it. I hate reading and writing, I never did.
After checking through my blog I found out the I have problem capitalizing some letters (i/I)
Killing Reading
I both agree and disagree because with being assigned questions the teacher will know who read the book but I disagree because I have do questions about the book.
2) Do you feel reading becomes more and more work the higher you progress in school? Please refer to your own experience to answer this question.
3) Would you enjoy reading "with no strings attached"? In other words, you read what you want but don't have to write a report or assignment once you've finished? Explain.
Yes I would like to read with no strings attached because I will have less stress to anwser questions and enjoy the book.
4) Imagine that you have just finished the best book you ever read. How would you want to share some of your reading experience with your classmates and teacher? (e.g. create a posted about the novel, conference with the teacher, present to a small group of students...)
Just talk to the teacher about the book because I don't like speaking out loud about certain things.
Friday, March 26, 2010
My Dream Last Night
My friend and I want to Future Shop to find a web cam. I was looking and looking for it but they only had one. So my friend and I deiced to leave because it seemed like a waste of time about going there. We were about to leave the store, then some random reason I ask a person if they have any LEGO. The looked at me with a weird face, and then he said" Yes, Yes we do. It's our special of the day!". So my friend and I got some LEGOS then we left. That was my dream last night.
Tuesday, March 23, 2010
Why Everyone Should Have A Pocket Camel
I think that everyone should have a pocket size camel with them at all times. The pocket camel can be your friends friend. They can protect you for danger. Also they are very easy to keep care of.
A pocket size camel is a great friend to have with you. They can make you happy when your friends are not around you. The camel can do what every you want it to do.
They can protect you any time your are in danger. You can use your pocket camel for a distraction then, your can use his/her as a weapon to protect you.
The pocket camel is so easy to keep care of. You don't have to walk it, clean up for it , and they are not messy.
That's all of my reasons that i think that everyone should have a pocket camel on you at all times.
How to write a news report
1. Pick a topic and a picture or more.
2. Make sure the picture and the topic are about the same thing.
3. Brain storm about ideas.
4. Don't make run on sentences.
5. Don't get off topic.6. Spell check.
7. Make sure you didn't say any I or me or anything about yourself.
Friday, March 12, 2010
Lord of the Flies
In the movie there was alot of evil/bad things that was happening. One of them is that a group of kids killed three people on the island. Another is that there was swearing alot to each other and not showing respect to one an others.
2. How responsible do you think the children are for what happened? At what age is a person no longer a child and fully responsible for his or her behaviour?
All children are responsible for what they do no matter what it is. The age that is not a kid any more is 13 and up so they will have to deal with there own behaviour.
3. What do you believe? Do people behave because they know that it is the right thing to do, or do people behave because they are afraid of consequences?
I believe that people do both of them because some people might be scary of the consequences and the other just know that it is not right to do somethings.
4. Whose fault was it that Piggy died? Was it simply the boy(s) who rolled the stone on top of him or was it the whole gang?
In a way it's was the whole gang fault that Piggy died because they inflects the boys that rolled the stone on top of him.
5. Do you feel that people act differently when they are in a group? What is the difference? Why will people do things as a group that they would never do on their own?
I think that people act different in a group of people because they want to be cool and they are scary to act on there own.
Wednesday, March 10, 2010
Writing Conventions
She claims she was playing Frisbee with her Friends at the park. When the flying dog of doom assaulted her out of no were the police and paramedics believe the dog was attracted to the blue of her jacket and was enraged by it.
2. Today i finished my News Report , that i did on Thursday ; but now im workin on this .
Today I finished my News Report, that I did on Thursday but now I'm working in on this .
3. It didnt change my mind but i think of high school better.
It didn't change my mind but I think of high school is better.
4. I did not watch the hole movie.
I didn't watch the hole movie.
5. i do not like to writ books or paragraph.
I don't like to writ books or paragraphs.
6. actually i found the movie very entertaining cause i understanded all of it.
Actually I found the movie very entertaining because I understand all of it.
7. I think theyre targeting people who would thing what it is like to be hang over and people who loves comedy.
I think there targeting people who would thing what it is like to be hang over and people who loves comedy.
8. pilot ejected him from a Southwest Airlines flight from Oakland to Burbank, California, saying he didn't fit properly in a single seat.
Pilot ejected him from a Southwest Airlines flight from Oakland to Burbank, California, saying "he didn't fit properly in a single seat.".
9. I write good enough that you can read it with perfectly grammer.
I write good enough that you can read it with perfectly grammer.
10. I dont write that much but im prety confident about my ability.
I don't write that much but I'm pretty confident about my ability.
11. The reason why I think Mrs. Martin and Mr. Pierce chose this film because it show us that anyone can write.
The reason why I think Mrs. Martin and Mr. Pierce chose this film because it show us that anyone can write.
12. Yes because its show that anyone can do what they want if they try and different ethnic groups can be friends with each other
Yes because its show that anyone can do what they want if they try and different ethnic groups can be friends with each other.
13. I did start it Thursday afternoon , but then i ran outta time , so just a few minutes ago i just finished it.
I did start it Thursday afternoon , but then I ran out of time , so just a few minutes ago I just finished it.
14. I hope i have a better english experience using the computers.
I hope I have a better english experience using the computers.
15. The movie i enjoy most is The Hang Over it was histarical.
The movie I enjoy most is The Hang Over it was Histarical.
Monday, March 8, 2010
Making Full Sentences
April has a movie called Lord of the Flies.
2. A group of boys about 5 to 15 years old.
There is a group of boys in the age rang around 5 to 15 years of age.
3. The boys, very excited about not having adults to tell them what to do.
It OKAY
4. At first, trying to create their own civilisation.
At first, they are trying to create their own civilisation.
5. The conch, a large shell. Passed from boy to boy.
A conch is a large shell that can be passed to boy to boy.
6. allowed to speak when they have the conch.
You are allowed to speak only if u have the conch.
7. some boys are kind, some are greedy and selfish
Some boy can be kind, and some are just greedy and selfish.
8. bullies making fun of piggy even though he is the smartest of all the boys.
The bullies is making of Piggy even though Piggy is the smartest in the class
9. Some of the boys decide to follow Ralph, some follow Jack.
Some boys follow Ralph, why all the other follow Jack.
10. basically Ralph's gang and Jack's gang.
Basically both boy gangs.
11. Obviously out of control when one boy dies.
It gets out of control when one boy dies.
12. At first, they boys are sure they will be rescued.
At first, the boys are sure that they will be rescued.
13. several weeks later without a rescue.
There was several weeks without any recur.
14. an incredible amount of violence from a group of very ordinary boys.
There was an incredible amount of violence from a group of boys
15. What might the writer, William Golding, be trying to say about human nature?
It OKAY
Friday, March 5, 2010
In my own opinion i don't think that boys and girl should be separate in high school. My reason why I thing this is because it would be different to have the same sex though out high school. Boys and girls will have more fights in high school.
In elementary school you were in a combined class room. So you use to it, but now going into an all boys/girls school would be hard to adjust it.
In an all girl high school I think there will be more drama then a combine high school. In an all boys high school I think they will be more fight there too.
Those are my reason why I think that high school student should be all combine together and not just in elementary school.
Tuesday, March 2, 2010
News Report

Canada's Gold in Males Hockey
In the last game of the winter Olympics team Canada won the gold medal against the U.S.A. team on February 27, 2010 in Vancover.
Both teams that were playing that day showed great teamwork with each other. Both teams fought to win the gold medal but the U.S.A. team fell short.
The U.S.A. team made a great shot to tie both teams up to getter. The shot was made in the last minute of the game.
In over time team Canada got the last shot to win the gold medal. the player who got the winning goal came from
Sydney Crosby
Thursday, February 18, 2010
Introduction to News Reports
My new report
-the most important information comes in the first sentence or two (the lead)
Marianne St-Gelais gave Canadians a solid silver present Wednesday to celebrate her 20th birthday.
The Montreal short-track speed skater sped to second place in the 500-metre event, keeping her nerve even after a false start and a crash on the first turn that required a restart.
-the information is presented most to least relevant
Most relevant: Marianne St-Gelais gave Canadians a solid silver present Wednesday to celebrate her 20th birthday.
Least relevant: keeping her nerve even after a false start and a crash on the first turn that required a restart.
-the reporter is not part of the story (the reporter writes using 'he,' 'she' or 'they' NOT 'I' or 'me').
The Montreal short-track speed skater sped to second place in the 500-metre event, keeping her nerve even after a false start and a crash on the first turn that required a restart.
"It's a wonderful birthday present," said St-Gelais, ranked fourth in her event and enjoying silver success at her first Olympic Games. "It's touched me very much.
-the reporter gives as many facts and details as possible.
- last year's impressive 500-metre gold medal at the World Junior Championships and second in the 500 metres at the Olympic tune-up World Cup 500 metres in Vancouver in October.
- ranked fourth in her event and enjoying silver success at her first Olympic Games.
-reporters try to include either direct or indirect quotations
-"It's the first [event], but there's a lot coming up, so we'll see — it is great to share this medal with everyone."
-"I knew it was possible, but with short track, you never know what's going to happen,"
