Tuesday, June 1, 2010
Lisa Lesie
Lisa Leslie had to achieve her goal to become an Olympic championships with her team and also she good female model. The Unites Stats female basket balls team made it into the Olympic to face the team that they last to Brazil in the world championships. During Lisa interviews she talk about how girl can become anything as all as they try to reach there goals. Alot of the young women looked up to she as a roll model and a athlete. She achieved her goals .
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Good job of using a main idea statement and supporting details. I'm putting a corrected version of your paragraph below. How many correctrions can you notice?
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** a lot -> always 2 words